Crud,

Okay sorry i couldn’t get this up earlier, but we have an announcement to make!

The other Mods and i have been toying around with a couple of ideas to add a bit of variety to the blog, and we decided that we were going to do different day themed stuff, Like today was going to be Weapon Wednesday where you could send in keyblades or other original weapons to be critiqued. Another idea we had was Headcanon Friday (which needs a better name to be perfectly honest) which is kind of like Weapon Wednesday, but with, you know, headcanons.

So I think if we could we could do this Weapon day tomorrow and then continue it regularly the rest of the time.

we hope you enjoy!

-Jay

Juniper Conceptual Stuffs

Kingdom Hearts Character Information

Ok, as some of you may know we have a new OC critique blog here, run by Spades,Ven, and Myself.Due to school however both of us have been preoccupied and I promise to try and update more, here is one of the last critiques on this bad oc blog.

-Amaya

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Name: AlexlenAge:15Weapon:KeybladeSomebody: MyraHomeworld:Castle OblivionOrganization Number:No.XVBio:Alexlen is a Nobody born in Castle Oblivion,She joined the Organization by meeting one of its members.Friends: Roxas,Xion,Axel,Myra,Lexaran

insert damn u len joke here
this is an example of don’t have your oc’s nobody name be (completely) different than their somebody’s name. it’s the somebody name + an x + mixing letters around = organization name.
you also can’t be friends with your somebody because you’re not sora and not a super special snowflake or the main protag.
also please put spaces after commas or i’ll kill something
-ven

Name: Alexlen
Age:15
Weapon:Keyblade
Somebody: Myra
Homeworld:Castle Oblivion
Organization Number:No.XV
Bio:
Alexlen is a Nobody born in Castle Oblivion,
She joined the Organization by meeting one of its members.
Friends: Roxas,Xion,Axel,Myra,Lexaran

insert damn u len joke here

this is an example of don’t have your oc’s nobody name be (completely) different than their somebody’s name. it’s the somebody name + an x + mixing letters around = organization name.

you also can’t be friends with your somebody because you’re not sora and not a super special snowflake or the main protag.

also please put spaces after commas or i’ll kill something

-ven

Psst, hey. You guys ever possibly in need of another oc critiquing admin? I've had pretty good responses to my own ocs here (post/24621522056) so I thought I could help out.

well we’ve currently got three other admins other than myself. (jay, spades, and amaya.) so we really don’t need any more. we just need to stop being lazy, or get some free time in some cases. i know some of the admins have jobs/school.

i was talking to jay earlier today about the crit blog, so you’ll probably see more with that very soon. and it’s really just a lack of submission on that blog that’s the issue as of now. there was something i crit today and you can see it there.

the other one in the inbox is really super long and i think the admins might need to come together and discuss that one. (maybe we could all talk on skype? i know we all have each other added there.)

but thank you for the offer!

-ven


 hey there my my friends showing a new development i named her MAYUMI (麻弓): Japanese name meaning “true bow (archery).”she fights like rwby yellow yang with her gun-gantlet as u see on her handsmayumi is called the the fist-slingerheres her story after she lost her parents grew up poor as a beggar girl stolen food to survive in the world and streets and so thin not getting much to eat and has a ragged dress and she found back yard of someones home witting for her end of her existent to go and until saix came along ask dose she want a prepose go on living and ti serve her prepose in missions and fighting skills and tells her with him the organization with her prepose and food eat fill her up with enargy keep going and proper clothing to wear and then she goes with him after hears his offer for her and she takes his offer and gose with him. and she served organization.13 ever since like a double agent or mercenary type one looking for prepose in her life


if you gotta compare your oc to an already established character you are doing it wrong and treading into sue territory.
also spell check is a thing that exists
-ven

:popcorn: hey there my my friends showing a new development i named her MAYUMI (麻弓): Japanese name meaning “true bow (archery).”

she fights like rwby yellow yang with her gun-gantlet as u see on her hands

mayumi is called the the fist-slinger

heres her story after she lost her parents grew up poor as a beggar girl stolen food to survive in the world and streets and so thin not getting much to eat and has a ragged dress and she found back yard of someones home witting for her end of her existent to go and until saix came along ask dose she want a prepose go on living and ti serve her prepose in missions and fighting skills and tells her with him the organization with her prepose and food eat fill her up with enargy keep going and proper clothing to wear and then she goes with him after hears his offer for her and she takes his offer and gose with him. and she served organization.13 ever since like a double agent or mercenary type one looking for prepose in her life

if you gotta compare your oc to an already established character you are doing it wrong and treading into sue territory.

also spell check is a thing that exists

-ven

we’re not dead and neither is the crit blog

we’re lazy and i think at least one of the other mods is in college so that does mean slightly busier than say a mod who sits at home all day (said mod being me oops)

i’ll look for some bad ocs and look at the ones that need crit and try and get that done

i apologize for how much we suck oopsies

-ven

I have a nobody oc in mind but I don't know what element to have her have. I thought of her having a bubble element and have her have a staff, but I thought that that sounded too much like Demyx's bubbles. Now I'm thinking of her element being music/sound. What do u think about it?
Anonymous

well you have to think about how they’d use the element for fighting. i mean sound can defs be used as a weapon but i don’t think that really counts as an “element”.

a staff sounds fine but that’s not very specific. you mean like a magician’s staff? a fighting staff?

-ven

so we decided to create a separate blog for oc help and critique requests. you can find that blog here and yeah! the blog page itself is still under construction but still feel free the ask/submit stuff there if you need to!

as a result, we’ll be clearing out the critique requests here because they’ve sat for so long. sorry for the inconvenience. we’ll also be moving past critique over there via reblog.

-spades


after 12 hours …. I finally Finished it!! so pleaseee, comment….? *puppy eyes*it was only 1 day of working tho, I usually spend a whole week with my regular drawings….. straaaange I secretely have a story based on birth by sleep and I created Aether. Her element is actually “flight”. But since that’s not magic is “cure” or “gravity” -still can’t decide =w=she’s not even as strong as Ventus, Aqua or Terra, but she is really fast. Aaaaand, this is not photomanipulation, I drew EVERYTHING OTL the hair was a total pain

Good Oc design right here.
I can’t find a profile on her but this design is very nice and I just felt the need to put it here.
The colors are fantastic, and it is very much teh BBB design factor to it
(Idk if it’s not manipulated photo, either way it is still very nice)
-Amaya

after 12 hours …. I finally Finished it!! so pleaseee, comment….? *puppy eyes*
it was only 1 day of working tho, I usually spend a whole week with my regular drawings….. straaaange 

secretely have a story based on birth by sleep and I created Aether. Her element is actually “flight”. But since that’s not magic is “cure” or “gravity” -still can’t decide =w=
she’s not even as strong as Ventus, Aqua or Terra, but she is really fast. 
Aaaaand, this is not photomanipulation, I drew EVERYTHING OTL the hair was a total pain

Good Oc design right here.

I can’t find a profile on her but this design is very nice and I just felt the need to put it here.

The colors are fantastic, and it is very much teh BBB design factor to it

(Idk if it’s not manipulated photo, either way it is still very nice)

-Amaya

Saix and Miyuki, orgy buddies xD lmao. Organization XIII for the win~!

Also, I know Miyuki doesn’t have her name arranged with an X. This RPC isn’t IN the organization, it’s just like a matching outfit picture kinda thing just to make it cute xD
Regardless DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA… HOW DIFFICULT IT IS TO PUT AN X IN MIYUKI’S NAME AND REARANGE THE LETTERS WHERE IT DOESN’T LOOK STUPID?! xD
It’s VERY difficult.
I found an Oc that is not only overly sexy with large breast, but is one of those Ocs that the creator likes to transfer from universe to universe…
The art is really good, I have no complaints like I normally would. From what I have read on their profile this character is a bad character and needs to be revised again
(This is their revised version btw)
-Amaya